Tangled

Tangled

A Poem by Solitary Dreamer

My mind is a jumbled mess.

I have noone to turn to and no one ever understands.

Is this the end?

Or only the beginning?

My emotions are tangled,

like a jumbled puzzle waiting to be solved.

Is there not anyone who can put me back together?

© 2010 Solitary Dreamer


Author's Note

Solitary Dreamer
I just felt all depresesed so I wrote this. It's not great but you know that's just me:D

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Off the cuff ! Well done real truth feeling and emotion good job!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I feel the exact same way, but only in the night time when I am alone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Darken clouds up high in the sky
Cold thick mist covers the ground
I feel my feet planted in a plane
But cannot sense nor see beyond

Posted 11 Years Ago


How many days, and in how many ways that I feel exactly that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This wasn't your best but it was still good.....and not to sound like a teacher but no one is two words lol jk I just learned that like two days ago. Lol I lushes u and there's no need to be depressed your awesome

Posted 13 Years Ago


i feel exactly this way at the moment..well written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i'll help put you back together! i love you so much!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can put you back together.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 11, 2010
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