TIME

TIME

A Poem by red punk

Tick,Tock
every second
every hour goes by
I am stuck

the minutes keep
moving. The 
years keep changing 
I am stuck

I am stuck in this 
world
stuck in this world of love&hatred 
in a world full of 
stupidity&intelligence
I am stuck

As everything and everyone 
moves along with their lives
I sit there. Everything
moves in a blur and
I stand still. You move on
with your life while the time for me 
has stopped.
I am stuck

© 2015 red punk


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A few years ago I felt like the persona in this great poem of yours living in a world of ambivalence, torn between extremes, stuck in time. Stuck, while everybody is changing and moving along with their lifes, leaving me alone. Awesome poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A different take with the representation of "time" in this verse...yet...time is just a calculation for us...not an actual event...but I do like the way you reflect this matter in the lines...gives an angle others jsut take for granted...with what they actually do with their time...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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red punk
red punk

greensboro, NC



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