What I hate?

What I hate?

A Poem by Reeses
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Just a few feelings....

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I hate not being happy and I hate not cracking a smile

I hate having a sucky vehicle that gives me problems every 15 miles

I hate going to a school that's designed to fail me

I hate being in situations that overwhelm me

I hate being the pick me up and having no one when I'm feeling down

I hate the murder rate in mi hometown

I hate people being in mi face and can't do anything to make me feel better

I hate when a girl is stalked when the stalker can't afford to 'sweat her'

I hate being hungry at work and having to stay that way

I hate knowing that the same fool texting me could've brought me lunch today

I hate waking up and realizing I have class

I hate going to the same professor that desires to fail mi azz

I hate talking to friends who don't know how to listen

I hate haters, just incase I forget to mention

I hate people who are full of themselves

I hate hiding my emotions and placing them on shelves

I hate the way it feels when I'm lonely

I hate meeting people who's motives are phony

I hate removing people from mi lyfe but

I hate having people I can't trust overnight

I hate false smiles in my face from future enemies when I don't know them

I hate not being able to trust people as far as a can throw them

I hate these angry feelings I think and write

Hate is a painful word so I'll label these experiences under 'strong dislyke'

~Reeses~

 

Finished: 11/10/09 9:06pm

© 2009 Reeses


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Reeses, it has been a while since you posted anything, so I say welcome back. You sure hate a lot of things and cataloged them in an interesting way. I know you mean exactly what you have said here. Theses things that you hate, in medical terms, are the presenting symptoms. It is what is beneath the presenting symptoms that I am concerned with. How has this one thing fractured in to so many things you hate? This is the thing you must exorcise. I guarantee that you will feel better,

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Reeses, it has been a while since you posted anything, so I say welcome back. You sure hate a lot of things and cataloged them in an interesting way. I know you mean exactly what you have said here. Theses things that you hate, in medical terms, are the presenting symptoms. It is what is beneath the presenting symptoms that I am concerned with. How has this one thing fractured in to so many things you hate? This is the thing you must exorcise. I guarantee that you will feel better,

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Reeses

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I am finding balance within. I'm now a junior at Loyola University of New Orleans, La and I feel that no matter how much it hurts, I must at least believe in myself. Times get hard for me and I lose.. more..

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