Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Reform69
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I feel anxious all the time and I needed to vent

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Who am I

Doctor, saving those

Treading in the deep end

Death

Who am I

Lawyer, defending justice

Upholding stability

Law

Who am I

Teacher, educating youth

For a brighter future

Guide

Who am I

Scientist, Answering puzzles

Not for the human eyes

Pioneer

Who am I

Politician, leading the country

Writing history with voice

Snake

I am

Dreamer and Thinker

Scared and Lost

Stray

© 2012 Reform69


Author's Note

Reform69
Constructive criticism is appreciated =) as well as any comments

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We question daily our purpose in life with constant thoughts on who we are, What are we going to become and where our journey will lead us. This is a refreshing read coming from a mindset ready to take on the world. Don't feel anxious, feel positive and proud of this great piece you have penned.

I love the free flow with this write, it works well with the way your trying to convey your words throughout this intriguing poem.

Who am I to criticise :O)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can relate to this poem so well, constantly being unsure of your life and what you want. But anyway, I love the way it is written too, especially the one word at the end of each occupation. It seems to be your interpretation of what that type of person is or becomes. Very well thought out and written!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 9, 2012
Last Updated on July 10, 2012
Tags: Lost, Anxious, Poem, Searching

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Reform69
Reform69

Bronx, NY



About
Hey! I'm 22 years old, still trying to find my calling in life haha. I am an easy going guy who is down for anything. I am a gamer at heart but I love to play sports and appreciate all forms of art.. more..

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