Never ending cycle

Never ending cycle

A Poem by Reina Love
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This one is one i made towards my Dad

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Every day, hour, minute, second every week, month, and year
It's the same old story with you an there seem's to be no cure
Why don't you fully listen to any word's we have to say
You yell "why you doing this to me?" an storm away
Why don't you stop to think life is ruff, your not the only one
You are older then I, don't you know? you don't know you can't just say you won?
Listen all the way never speak before another is done
When you do that's when we yell "Listen!","Get away from me" you yell 
Then you say "Your gonna give me a heart attack" like we're putting you through hell
Your giving yourself a heart attack my dear Father
I only speak the truth as I'm your loving Daughter

© 2015 Reina Love


Author's Note

Reina Love
I just edited it now i believe it is done :)

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that was really great ;) it has alot of emotion in it and tells a great story :) great job :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the appreciation 😊
Justin

6 Years Ago

your welcome, keep it up and i will continue to read your writing :)
Short yer very clever =)
Your giving yourself a heart attack my dear Father
I only speak the truth as I'm your loving Daughter
and actually I like these lines that created a good ending the this write-up

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

I thought so too im about to post a new one that i just wrote up right on the spot it just came to m.. read more
Personally, i love it when things are a bit mismatched and not orderly.
"Every day, hour, minute, second every week, month, and year". First the amount of time is decreasing (day, hour, minute, second) and then increasing (week, month, and year).
Lovely read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice, just make sure to have commas when listing the hour, minute etc. Other than that a very good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

I believe i just fixed that haha and thank you i have had this one on my phone for a little bit thou.. read more
Ilerah

6 Years Ago

Yah, may as well post it.
Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Right? haha

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Added on April 16, 2015
Last Updated on June 22, 2015
Tags: Family, Speaking up, Life, Struggles

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Reina Love
Reina Love

Tacoma, WA



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(I HAVE A KIK ACCOUNT IF YOU WANT ASK ME FIRST CAUSE WHEN I SEE SOME RANDOM GUY I BLOCK THEM OTHERWISE I ONLY TALK TO GIRLS ON KIK)I'm still pretty much new to writing poems though I've been basically.. more..

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