An Endless Echo

An Endless Echo

A Poem by Reina Love
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This is just something that came to me right on the spot theres a few i made a while back that actually are alot like this one but wrote differently

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What am I? who am I?
Am I just a pawn in someone's game?
Am I a hunter or someone else's aim?
As they point there arrow at me
I can sense it yet can't see
Do I stay? or do I run?
What direction are they aiming from?
I can feel my heart pounding like a drum
As I run and jump to find a hiding place
i see a big tree really wide at the bass
I sprinted and jumped to hide behind the tree's trunk
I don't sense it anymore, maybe I'm in luck

When did this start? When will it end?
I have been dodging this hunter for centuries
Many lives i have lived ending under this very tree
Please someone set me free from the crazy cycle
Calling out to the savour of the now through thick hail
Please hear me your the only one who can free me
You can find me under this large tree
I will wait as long as i can for you to finally come
When you get real close you'll hear a faint hum
Your the only one who can hear her
This is my message to you my beautiful healer

© 2015 Reina Love


Author's Note

Reina Love
I wrote this right on the spot i think its good but sense i have written alot of poems or lyrics that have this same message its kinda werid to me lols but im putting on here anyways hope you all like it

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It should be "As they point thier arrow at me." And "you're the only one who can hear her." Other than that, this is quite a haunting piece, being hunted by another.

Posted 6 Years Ago


that was really good :) the way you set it up with asking questions was awesome :) u did a great job :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Thank you Justin :)
In my mind, I can see one of those really old black and white photos of a man, maybe in his thirties looking poor or uninterested. Meanwhile, his body rests under that old tree in which he is condemned to repeat his death over and over. Real good poem Reina. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


 Relic

6 Years Ago

You don't feel suffocated do you?
Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Why you ask that?
 Relic

6 Years Ago

If you were buried in a previous lifetime.....might it replay itself through events in your life?
I like the structure and the message it has inside =)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

And what might you think is the message if you don't mind me asking? im just curious
That was such a beautiful piece, and the imagery you created was brilliant. Just one think, I think it should've been "their" instead of "there" in the fourth line :)
Maumil

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Oh ya thanks for pointing that out i typed it so fast looking back an forth from my phone to the com.. read more
Maumil Mehraj

6 Years Ago

Thats true, I believe that whatever we are meant to be is revealed to us in portions, and when the t.. read more
Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Lols thanks :)

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Added on April 28, 2015
Last Updated on April 28, 2015
Tags: Voices, Love, Mother, Child, Death, Cycle, Running, Hiding

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Reina Love
Reina Love

Tacoma, WA



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(I HAVE A KIK ACCOUNT IF YOU WANT ASK ME FIRST CAUSE WHEN I SEE SOME RANDOM GUY I BLOCK THEM OTHERWISE I ONLY TALK TO GIRLS ON KIK)I'm still pretty much new to writing poems though I've been basically.. more..

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