Feels Like A Crush

Feels Like A Crush

A Poem by Reina Love
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Its about a girl I'm crushing on

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I got something to say to get off my chest 
I got to be honest now it is best
I don't want to say it through text
Let's talk in person its a must

Now don't take this the wrong way
I know you don't swing that way
I just need you to hear what i got to say
I know there is a price to pay
With what i need to say

I've had a big crush on you for a while now
Even though you were like a rival
Your life story turned a dial
Now this crush goes on for miles

© 2015 Reina Love


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~It is always beneficial to the conscience to let your feelings be known.~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bold and beautiful, I'd say!
Good luck with her ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well now that you wrote about it, time to go for it! Good luck!

Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some things are better to say in person, even if it comes to your feelings. Texts can't tell people how you feel or how you mean things, through a screen they can be deeply misunderstood. Sometimes it's best to let your feelings out, be it on paper or in person. I also love the rhyming in this, it made this work :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I like the write... it's definitely bold and honest which is great. I think as far as what is said to the crush... I think you can still develop on it more and detail more of what you feel. It built up and then when it got to the punch it ended really quick. I would maybe add some more detail... what is it you like so much. Things like the way her smile shines when she thinks no ones watching, her innocent laugh when she thinks no ones listening. I think you could really blow this one out of the park with some more details on those feelings :) Good work I liked it now give me some more lol :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Thank you and I did basically write it out in 10 minutes so I wasn't expecting anyone to think its a.. read more
AaronFreitas

6 Years Ago

I think its awesome :) Sometimes I do the same I write something and post it cause I like the rawne.. read more
Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Ya me too I know I do 😊

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Added on May 23, 2015
Last Updated on June 22, 2015
Tags: Truth, Feelings, Speaking up, Girls liking Girls, Crush, Love

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Reina Love
Reina Love

Tacoma, WA



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