A Poem by Radad Ibn Nasir

Thoughtful disconnection

The sun rises and sets,
The land dries the sky wets.
Someone cries for what he forgets.
Worldly tears for
Worldly years.
Reaching ties of
knotted lives.
Circular knowledge,
Remembered wise.
Open time,
Closed inside.

© 2011 Radad Ibn Nasir

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nice write,
flows well too!
diggin the 1st two lines!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love the idea of knotted lives. Interesting poem ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like the rhyme scheme. this is simple and somehow meaningful. verynice

Posted 10 Years Ago

you are wiser than your years

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on March 1, 2011
Last Updated on December 22, 2011
Tags: think, see, will, be


Radad Ibn Nasir
Radad Ibn Nasir

Youngstown, OH

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