Connections

Thoughtful disconnection

The sun rises and sets,
The land dries the sky wets.
Someone cries for what he forgets.
Worldly tears for
Worldly years.
Reaching ties of
knotted lives.
Circular knowledge,
Remembered wise.
Open time,
Closed inside.

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

nice write,
flows well too!
diggin the 1st two lines!

[anaisbelieve]

I love the idea of knotted lives. Interesting poem ;)

[Hannah Paige]

I like the rhyme scheme. this is simple and somehow meaningful. verynice

[Emily B]

you are wiser than your years