Melting Love

Melting Love

A Poem by Luna
"

Only the cold can show you what warmth actually is

"
If I had the chance
to reason with you
Then we could make it better
Now it's up to you

Take my hand or push me
from these frozen bars
Or let me lead you 
slowly through the dark

Place your hand on my chest
Look it's beating fast
You are who you are now
And I'll accept your past

Let me heal your wounds
Throw away your cast
And if we have to die together
Then let this breath be our last

Don't run ahead, so far
It's hard to walk on ice
Don't let me go right now  (or else)
The pain in my heart will ignite

My aching heart was frozen
To melt it I needed time
But there's no need to wait till Summer now
Cause I've got your hand in mine

© 2017 Luna


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Very nicely done, good job

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
The thought of love "melting" conjures up a warmth like no other. Such lovely verses, Luna...and the ending was perfectly written!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you Kelly😏 I am glad you enjoyed it.
A poetically expressive write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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I like the general feeling behind this one.
Timing in love is everything and sometimes we fall for the one that thaws our heart but they move on from us before the thaw is complete because we've been so difficult. Such a s****y situation. I'm going to recommend that in the two place you use the word "than" that you change it to "then".

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) (And also thanks for the tip i am going to fix that in no time)

Place your hand on my chest
Look it's beating fast
You are who you are now
And I'll accept your past..........

These lines are so touchy......can relate and the whole piece superbly written...I loved it...Thank you for sharing....

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you . I am very happy that you loved it and your welcome if it makes you smile I'll share ple.. read more
Love that lives is heat that breathes life...
Nice, warm and cozy poem!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you Terry :)
and ...wasn't it the universal kind of love that Aslan breathed from his chest that freed all of the creatures the Wicked Queen has frozen in Narnia? (Sorry Luna, just watched a certain movie there lol).
This is beautiful Luna. Holding hands is so romantic.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna

4 Years Ago

Haha no problem you can watch as many movies as you want, heck even I'll join you ;) . Thank you .
This is beautiful. The warmth of love can make the hardest and coldest heart melt.
Here its an aching heart that has been frozen.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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SKY
My aching heart was frozen
To melt it I needed time
But there's no need to wait till Summer now
Cause I've got your hand in mine


I think it's coffee ☕ time. Since your words already melted the readers heart. Superb!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna

4 Years Ago

Haha thanks skyfall27 as long as you guys feel warmth from this I am happy. Btw that's my favorite s.. read more
SKY

4 Years Ago

lol Happy Christmas and wishing you a bright year ahead my friend . 🌻
Luna

4 Years Ago

Same here my friend Have a great Christmas :)
This is beautiful! This is what most of us want right? To be with the one we love.. I liked reading this! Good job ☺

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luna

4 Years Ago

Thank you i wrote it when drinking tea yesterday and the tea made me feel warm. It was nice :)
Dr. YumnaKay

4 Years Ago

Yes well tea does have that effect on me too.. You are welcome 😊

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