DADDY'S LITTLE GIRL
A Poem by
Rene Velez
Written by my daughter Abbey for me, I'm a lucky Dad.
As I look out to see I remember the times on your knee when it came up to my biggest fears you came and wiped away my tears you always seem to know when I need a smile especially when you haven't seen one in a while we seem to always be on the same page even though there's a difference in age we know how to make each other laugh and that makes time fly fast daddy that's why I'm so thankful for you I would never ask for anyone new I love you so very much because you help me with all my problems and such I know you wish to give me the world but I'm good with the title "Daddy's Little Girl"
© 2012 Rene Velez
Author's Note
A poem written by my Daughter Abbey who is 9 years old, I think she takes after her Dad, man was I impressed.
Reviews
Wow that's too sweet my friend... Makes me wanna be a father someday.. Inspiring! :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awe! So sweet, cute, and flows so nicely! She is so talented! Just like her daddy :) Extremely impressive thats shes nine!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awe! So sweet, cute, and flows so nicely! She is so talented! Just like her daddy :) Extremely impressive thats shes nine!
wow nine impressie she is already born with an innate talent of writing she does take care of you her rhyming is great and her flow is amaizng love your daughters poem !:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
wow nine impressie she is already born with an innate talent of writing she does take care of you her rhyming is great and her flow is amaizng love your daughters poem !:)
_ your daughter is so sweet ^^
....hehehehe.. i am impressed, you said she was nine and she can do poem like this, she'll be a great writer in the near future ^^
i salute her :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
_ your daughter is so sweet ^^
....hehehehe.. i am impressed, you said she was nine and she can do poem like this, she'll be a great writer in the near future ^^
i salute her :)
Awww this is so precious thank you for sharing this with us. She is lovely at poetry it does seem like she takes after you. :) She did really well with this touching write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Awww this is so precious thank you for sharing this with us. She is lovely at poetry it does seem like she takes after you. :) She did really well with this touching write.
Ha, what an honor! Yes, she is a wonderful poetess, and at 9 years old, Awesome!!!
Great Write, Little Miss Velez!
RLG,
Tommy
Posted 12 Years Ago
Ha, what an honor! Yes, she is a wonderful poetess, and at 9 years old, Awesome!!!
Great Write, Little Miss Velez!
RLG,
Tommy
awww. That was really beautiful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
awww. That was really beautiful.
Absolutely gorgeous - one to treasure for eternity!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Absolutely gorgeous - one to treasure for eternity!
Simple, and a final wording to a brace that never brakes, if one believes these things of course, in which I do, well done my love x
Posted 12 Years Ago
Simple, and a final wording to a brace that never brakes, if one believes these things of course, in which I do, well done my love x
I too am very impressed. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
I too am very impressed. :)
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