DADDY'S LITTLE GIRL

DADDY'S LITTLE GIRL

A Poem by Rene Velez
"

Written by my daughter Abbey for me, I'm a lucky Dad.

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As I look out to see
I remember the times on your knee

when it came up to my
biggest fears you came
and wiped away my tears

you always seem to know
when I need a smile
especially when you haven't
seen one in a while

we seem to always be
on the same page
even though there's
a difference in age

we know how to make
each other laugh
and that makes time fly fast

daddy that's why I'm so thankful
for you I would never ask for
anyone new

I love you so very much
because you help me
with all my problems and such

I know you wish to
give me the world but
I'm good with the title
"Daddy's Little Girl"

© 2012 Rene Velez


Author's Note

Rene Velez
A poem written by my Daughter Abbey who is 9 years old, I think she takes after her Dad, man was I impressed.

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Wow that's too sweet my friend... Makes me wanna be a father someday.. Inspiring! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awe! So sweet, cute, and flows so nicely! She is so talented! Just like her daddy :) Extremely impressive thats shes nine!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow nine impressie she is already born with an innate talent of writing she does take care of you her rhyming is great and her flow is amaizng love your daughters poem !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


_ your daughter is so sweet ^^

....hehehehe.. i am impressed, you said she was nine and she can do poem like this, she'll be a great writer in the near future ^^
i salute her :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww this is so precious thank you for sharing this with us. She is lovely at poetry it does seem like she takes after you. :) She did really well with this touching write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ha, what an honor! Yes, she is a wonderful poetess, and at 9 years old, Awesome!!!

Great Write, Little Miss Velez!
RLG,
Tommy

Posted 12 Years Ago


awww. That was really beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Absolutely gorgeous - one to treasure for eternity!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple, and a final wording to a brace that never brakes, if one believes these things of course, in which I do, well done my love x

Posted 12 Years Ago


I too am very impressed. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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