When The Time Comes

When The Time Comes

A Poem by Joseph - Michael
"

My long lost love letter that was never taken serious and personal.

"

 

You

 

When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

 

For You

 

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long

My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches

 

Just You

 

When There Is A Moment That I Have Been Long Dreaming About

The Ways We Once Were As For Our Happiness And Much More

You Are More Than Welcome To Have A Try And Give It A Shout

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compare To Any Of The Folklore

 

Only You

 

When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here

I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator

You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear

Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

 

All You

 

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On

There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises

All Of The Dreams Will Be Made And Will Come True For The Battles To Be Won

You Won't Be Forgotten, You Won't Be Alone, Otherwise You'll Be Sadly Missed

 

And That's How Much Of The Whole World I Think Of You...

 

© 2013 Joseph - Michael


Author's Note

Joseph - Michael
Don't mind me, I just, I don't know, I guess it's safe to say that I was truly lovesick.

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this is a beautiful poem, joe. it was nicely written and very emotional...to me, it seems you are promising what will be at each stage of your growing together and the relationship moving forward.

the person who you are lovesick over is a very lucky one! with luck and hopefulness, maybe this one person will see and be with you in this journey of love....

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.



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Heartfelt, metaphorical, depthfully projected with wonder, and desire, combined with pain, balanced imagery and emotion that makes an excellent poem,
Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet.. and beautiful!

Aww.. true love --
sighs..

I agree totally with Amanda -- what a lucky girl! It's difficult
to find this type of loyalty and sincerity --

Lovely, heartfelt poem! Well written and formatted ... :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Was this a contest piece using song titles? Seems that way.
Should 'Bear' be "Bare" ..?

Obviously some one is in love with another some one; but I, myself, had trouble reading some of the stanzas. The sentiment is beautiful, though.



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DAMN!!! ~That was f*****g beautiful... I'm somewhat speechless:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully , Romantic was referd to you , beauty you pen

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem.. the chatterbox is for once.. speechless.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

STUNNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, the power of Love. It can fill us with such joy and wonder!!!!!

This is really a great poem!!!

Josie

P.S Good luck in my contest :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sweet and romantic. i loved the last two stanza's the most. they were what hit me most powerfully. what a lovely write, thank you for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am a little lovesick myself. And I adored this.
From one full heart to another it is beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.
Best,
Lee

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love sickness can grab the mind as well as the heart-yearning for that which is just out of touch can tie us in knots that can never be undone...lovely poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Joseph - Michael
Joseph - Michael

Detroit, MI



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