Soul The Destroyer

This is a collaboration between me and Jasmine AKA "Blade & Blood".

 

The Lost Soul Wandering Within The Kingdom
His Intentions Are About To Be Served And Done

He Is Rejected From Hell-
Stuck In Mortals’ Cell.
Heaven Has No Control;
Hell Is Shamed By Merciless Soul.

He Is The Fallen Angel Of Heaven-
Avenging His Long Lost Haven.

Pure Hatred Fuels His Heart,
Tearing His Sanity Completely Apart.
A Blood Red Moon Hangs Above His Head
Setting The Mood For His Rampage To Begin.

Standing On The Edge Out Of Darkness
Between There And Around Near Brightness

The Bloody Destroyer Is Prepared To Strike;
He Wanders In The Blackness Of The Night,
He Patiently Waits For Fresh Blood To Spill-
Eagerly Awaiting Another Cold Kill.

Watching For Anything That Moves Willfully
Then Will Make His Attack So Beautifully

Sensing The Victims' Blood On His Bare Skin
Slowly Enjoying Every Moment Of Sin
Gripping Tightly On Blades Filled With Rust
Yearning For Some More Of This Bloodlust

As The Sky Is About To Darken All Too Slow
He Is Still Lusting For More Of That Deathblow

Until He Spotted Something Lurking Nearby
Already On The Edge To Do The Call Of War Cry
Watching And Waiting When Teeth Softly Grind
Nothing, But Only Death To Be Created In Mind

When The Wind Interrupted His Mind With A Howl
He Begins To Walk Along With Soft Guttural Growl

The Sound Of Crunching Underneath His Feet
He Looked Down And Spots A Skull Smelling Reeked
Leaning Down to Grab It, He Holds It Up High And Mighty
Roaring From The Bottom Of His Lungs, Ever So Frightening

Now, Ne Is Already Raising His Own Unholy Action
In Order For Consequences To Be Told Of His Reaction.

 

Author's Note

Now that you have read this piece, wanna guess which are mine and which are her? Please, don't hurt yourself LMAO Just kidding, but all types and kinds of reviews are still welcome.

By the way, it has nothing to do with my "Ascension Of The Fallen" at all...

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

Well I dont want to guess I might hurt my self lol but I do want to say this was a remarkable piece and I enjoyed reading every bit of it...You and some other I know have a great way of putting words together..You have this sence of writing like no body I have seen and thats a great thing.You can just come up with any remarkable thing and put it together like it was the easyest thing on earth..I am glad that I got the chance to read this great job,God Bless Belinda

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done the imagery and detail you and Jasmine have put into this is just breath taking overall a very big congrads for both of you on this awesome piece...fav lines...The Sound Of Crunching Underneath His Feet
He Looked Down And Spots A Skull Smelling Reeked
Leaning Down to Grab It, He Holds It Up High And Mighty
Roaring From The Bottom Of His Lungs, Ever So Frightening

Now, Ne Is Already Raising His Own Unholy Action
In Order For Consequences To Be Told Of His Reaction.

[Ahmad Alhour]

Well written and organized.
For a while, I was singing it...

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Wow, our poem looks great in this font. ^^ It was great workin' with ya, Joe. It was amazing, knowing that it only took us a mere two days to complete this. LOL! Hope we can collaborate again. :)

Ironically Yours.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, amazing collaboration, this poem is fantastic. The imagery is just terrific. You both did a wonderful job and I really enjoyed this piece. Great write!!!

Heather