The Dishearten

Just one of those quick Haiku, because it's too painful to write a longer version.

 

 

 

I Gave You My Heart

 

But Now I Don't Want It Back

 

Because You Broke It

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

She just hurt me so bad and I just had to write it out to get rid of the unbearable pain. No need to leave me any reviews.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

I'm so sorry to hear that this happened to you, but this pain spawned creativity. It truly is amazing how you put it so simply... three lines are a thousand words, in this case, because anyone can relate to it, and that's usually what the readers want. ;)

...Although, I didn't expect a haiku from you. This was definitely a pleasant surprise. ^^

Ironically Yours.

[BABSIE BEE]

So so sorry...seriously !!! Why are humans so ruthless ? Who wants a sore heart ? Write it all down, get it out and your friends will see you through this. You will laugh again. Don,t fret, be strong.
Take care
BABSIExx

[Lia]

[Michelle Lea]

I'm so sorry for your pain.... but use the pain to your benefit and write it out, that's what I always do, even if it seems to scare some of the readers! See it brought out the Haiku in you (-:

[darkgurl]

Sorry to hear about this. Short well impacted message...Kim

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I felt I needed to leave a review.... This is a sad piece and it's simple yet powerful... everyone can relate to this piece everyone knows how it feels... but in time the heart does mend and in time the wounds will become less deep... This was a good piece... good job! if you ever need me, i'm here....

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Even though there's only three lines, your pain is very clearly expressed. And the pictures fit this haiku perfectly. I'm so sorry this happened to you.

Heather

[Leo Gems]

No reviews.. Just leaving a hug.. ;p

[Angela]

This breaks my heart also. I can feel the pain. Sometimes life sucks, but it definitely still goes on. Hang in there.

[NightDream]

Very simple and to the point. It is the definition of pain and betrayal.
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