Before You Say Good Bye

Before You Say Good Bye

A Poem by Joseph - Michael
"

Just needed to write the pain out.

"

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

There's Something I Want You To Try

 

Just Tell Me Something Important To My Face

 

That Way There Won't Be Any Surprising Traces

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

Don't Give Me Any More Of The Lies

 

Just Tell Me Nothing But The Truth

 

Otherwise There Will Be No Truce

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

I Want You To Look Into My Eyes

 

And Tell Me What You Had In Mind

 

Then I'll Understand And Will Be Kind

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

I Promised Myself Not To Cry

 

I Will Be Still And Listen To Your Farewell

 

And I Will Wish You Nothing But Well

 

 

 

Before You Say Good Bye

 

Before You Decide To Look At The Sky

 

Before We Go Apart And Be On Our Ways

 

Aren't You Going To Wish Me A Happy Birthday?

 

 

 

Good Day

 

Good Night

 

Good Luck

 

And

 

Good Bye

 

© 2013 Joseph - Michael


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I know you said no need to write, but I felt the need to say something...

Just beautifully painful and confused at what is happening- opening each section with, "Before You Say Good Bye' just completely breaks my heart, that and the lines:

"I Want You To Look Into My Eyes
And Tell Me What You Had In Mind"

Hope writing the piece helped and thank you for sharing.





Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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It makes recall some events in my life!
It was extremely touching, specially when you LIVE this poem...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not leaving a review... just a hug.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well you deserve reviews.

This was a really beautiful poem, sad, and heartfelt beyond reason.

Great job!





Before You Say Good Bye



Don't Give Me Any More Of The Lies



Just Tell Me Nothing But The Truth



Otherwise There Will Be No Truce



Breathtaking.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! This is so aweosme Joe, I like this write alot i can feel the emotion, a very powerful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem about a wretched event.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I feel for ya dude. I'm starting to realize that writing might me the only way to expel the pain. This one was full of it .. hope it made you feel a lil bit better.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Happy Birthday, Joe.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'm so sorry it went that way,
sometimes, the one you love so strongly can
be so mean as to not even say goodbye,
or hold a truce, :(
---mishel :S

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I know you said no need to write, but I felt the need to say something...

Just beautifully painful and confused at what is happening- opening each section with, "Before You Say Good Bye' just completely breaks my heart, that and the lines:

"I Want You To Look Into My Eyes
And Tell Me What You Had In Mind"

Hope writing the piece helped and thank you for sharing.





Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Joseph - Michael
Joseph - Michael

Detroit, MI



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I'm no one special. I'm just a single father in the MMA training to kill the anger and the personal pain in order to move on. Whenever I'm not busy, even with the damn procrastination issue, I try my .. more..

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