Hitman's X Mark

Hitman's X Mark

A Poem by Joseph - Michael
"

Out of all kinds of shooters, you have to admit that the professional hitmen are the best shooters of them all.

"

 

Clipping                                                 Snapping

All                                  All

The                    The

Pieces

Very                To

   Hard                               Tightly

    Together                                                        Altogether

 

 

 

 

 

Finger                                            Ready

On                             To

The              Pull

Trigger

And                And

All                                   All

Set                                                 Ready

 

 

 

 

 

Waiting                                                  Watching

Slowly                        Slowly

For          For

Target

To                 To

Move                             Come

     Out                                                Outside

 

 

 

 

 

No                                                      No

Time                               Time

To                   For

Sweat

To           For

Slide                       Any

    Down                                         Reasons

 

 

 

 

 

Finally                                             BAM!

The                            The

Main            Only

Target

Is                Is

Bleeding                     On      

Dead                                           Move    

 

 

 

 

 

Leaving                                                           Walking

The                                           The

Weapon                   Past

Behind

Without                 Without

Any                                                   Any  

Regrets                                                                Traces

 

 

 

 

 

Collecting                                                Instead    

The                                The

Million           Blood

  Money

Struck            And

Back                               Walk

Hard                                                  Away

   

 

 

 

 

  The                                                     They  

Contract                            Just   

    Was           Need

A

Fall            Big

   Guy                            Deadly

Badly                                                  Lie

 

 

 

 

 

Now                                                    And

The                                    He

Hitmand       Already

Got

   His                  Pissed

Personal                                 As      

Revenge                                                 Hell         

 

 

 

 

 

Moral                                                 Pick 

Point                           Best

Of               Of

The

   Best     Whole

      Then                             Crazy

        Die                                                       Story

 

© 2013 Joseph - Michael


Author's Note

Joseph - Michael
I know that it's probably hard to read like that, but don't mind me.

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If nothing else the creativity was awesome.This might have taken you a while to come up with. It's a body of work that shows creativity, dedication, and constructiveness. Nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a cool poem, but I already told you this. I had to read it again though. I like "out-of-the-box" thinking; makes you stand out from the rest. I like the way it reads, great story-telling. Nice job, as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

F###ing!!! amazing. I could do that...lol not...yet this hour though.=)
I think I got some new inspiration flowing down my arm and out my penbut is it really for everyone. You did ...wow you got tongue, cut out and marked!! Brilliant my frind..just wow

Much respect,
Anna

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Holy crap, that was God-awesome! Yeah, it was a little hard to read, but I really have to admire the creativity you put into this! Must've taken forever!

This has a really cool message... very dark, but definitely an awesome storyline. Great work, buddy. ^^

Ironically Yours.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the style of the poem really makes this a great piece. It's so unique and clever and the words definately punch out, making the message as clear as a bell. Amazing write!

Flame

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the power and look of this poem. You made it come alive the way you wrote it. The words punch out the story and the way it looks give a visual interpretation of it that really gives it a pulsing, electric feel. You should do more like this. Great work here Joe. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

man, I feel the churning of teeth, the cutting, very visual must say, Joseph-MIchael,

----mishel :S xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Actually I like the X's I think it's pretty cool, I read it okay, Full of powerful words and very well stated excellent written....Kim

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Joseph - Michael
Joseph - Michael

Detroit, MI



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I'm no one special. I'm just a single father in the MMA training to kill the anger and the personal pain in order to move on. Whenever I'm not busy, even with the damn procrastination issue, I try my .. more..

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