The Wondering

The Wondering

A Poem by Joseph - Michael
"

Damn "Hamlet" for getting me to think.

"

 

Alone And Confuse



How Did I Ever Get Them?



What Did I Do Wrong?

© 2013 Joseph - Michael


Author's Note

Joseph - Michael
I don't know how to make a longer version of it, so I made it short and simple in the Haiku way.

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Very nice.
I feel as though Haiku's say more than the longest poems.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A good Haiku piece~so nicely penned

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Such a powerful Hailu here
Like this alot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short and to the point. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very powerful piece spoken in so few words.... overall nice job on this and you should post more your writing is respected more than you know!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"Alone and Confuse" needs a 'D' at the end. Otherwise, I liked it. Short and simple in the true haiku form, but it contains the feeling of lonely disillusionment one feels. A series of these wouldn't be out of the question.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 10, 2009
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Joseph - Michael
Joseph - Michael

Detroit, MI



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I'm no one special. I'm just a single father in the MMA training to kill the anger and the personal pain in order to move on. Whenever I'm not busy, even with the damn procrastination issue, I try my .. more..

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