Dreams For Us

Dreams For Us

A Poem by Eli Lane

Our night time world.
Guitar songs that sound like velvet.

They sing about long roads.
Freedom.
The way back home.

I look at you and know, you're such a man now.
I see front porch nights with you.
Midnight, summer rovings with our friends.

I see passion in your fingers.
Babies in your eyes.

© 2014 Eli Lane


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So very beautiful and loving is your poem today. Nicely penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eli Lane

10 Years Ago

Thank you, kind sir. It was written with a lot of love from inside :)
LOVELY. : )
beautiful one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eli Lane

10 Years Ago

Well, thank you!:)
This is so beautifully soft and romantic... It must be true love to look in another's eyes and see a beautiful future -

I see passion in your fingers.
Babies in your eyes...
beautiful!
:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eli Lane

10 Years Ago

I just noticed this review! Thank you for taking the time to read my writing:) and yes, it is about.. read more
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Congratulations!

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Added on January 12, 2014
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Tags: young love, dreamers, bohemia, the future

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Eli Lane
Eli Lane

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