Inspiration, where are you?

Inspiration, where are you?

A Story by Rhianne Ney

Inspiration where are you?
Did you hide in the....?
~wind blowing on my face?
~the nature around me?
~the babbling water in the brook?
~the birds singing above the trees?
~the rocks I kick when I'm bored?
~the smiles of people I meet?
~the arguments I have with other people everyday?
~the song I keep replaying in my Mp3?
~the guy I was captivated with?
~the anime I was addicted to?
~the classrooom where my graded life was?
~or Maybe from God above


© 2012 Rhianne Ney


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Rhianne Ney
please review, it's alright even though it's negative or not....

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We all feel this way (well, I do sometimes, at least) when it seems that we just can't feel inspired to (in my case write...draw, sometimes) or do whatever it is we have been gifted with. I love how you emphasized the mundane ("that anime I was addicted to?" haha! : ) ) , searching the everyday life for where inspiration might be hiding. Great last line, leaving off the question mark and any punctuation so that acknowledging God as the giver of inspiration was neither a declaration nor an interrogation, simply something that is. Well done, it was nice to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Writer #00

8 Years Ago

No problem again, just making sure I understood it properly, haha : )
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Yeah, it is fine


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We all feel this way (well, I do sometimes, at least) when it seems that we just can't feel inspired to (in my case write...draw, sometimes) or do whatever it is we have been gifted with. I love how you emphasized the mundane ("that anime I was addicted to?" haha! : ) ) , searching the everyday life for where inspiration might be hiding. Great last line, leaving off the question mark and any punctuation so that acknowledging God as the giver of inspiration was neither a declaration nor an interrogation, simply something that is. Well done, it was nice to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Writer #00

8 Years Ago

No problem again, just making sure I understood it properly, haha : )
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Yeah, it is fine
I liked this poem, its full of thoughts and questions.
Excellent job!
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the comment, i'm feeling more encouraged now (:
∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you are :)

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Rhianne Ney
Rhianne Ney

Baguio City, the city of cold temperature, Philippines



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So there I'm back from the depths of High School Life and can now post anything possible. --- Notice: To some book supporters, I deleted all of them for some issues that I have to battle right no.. more..

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