I apologize

I apologize

A Poem by Rhianne Ney
"

being bullied and disliked

"
Sorry if I found out,
I was oblivious at first,
You were calling me names,
And talk behind my back every time.

Sorry if I'm not a person likeable,
I can't change that fast,
And I don't want to change for you,
Because I feel unfair.

Sorry if I displease you,
I cannot be what you want me to be,
I didn't wish to know the truth,
Because I don't want to be hated.

I cry every night,
Wishing that everyone should just accept who I am,
I want to be accepted.

This simple wish,
I know it might not come true,
So, God please help me.


© 2013 Rhianne Ney


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Rhianne Ney
I am so-so right now, both optimist and pessimist(: Writing helps always

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This poem makes me mourn for all those who have been bullied or hurt by all the pathetic people who think they are above everyone else. It's hard to be optimistic when the world is as filthy as it is.
They say keep your friends close and your enemies closer, but I don't agree with that. I'd say keep your values close and God closer.
Deep poem you have here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review... that's right I can't agree with keep your enemies closer also... (:



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"Be who you are and say what you think because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." -dr. Seuss

There will be people who like you for you, make sure you keep those people close, nice poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review (:
C.C. Marx

8 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

(:
So sad, often with dire consequences....much strength and moxy in this work of yours, kudos.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Yeah, thanks a lot!
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Anytime :-)
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

;D My pleasure to have your audience
( ´ ▽ ` )ノ please feel better, even if you're 'so-so' you should be 'perfect'!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carnation

8 Years Ago

THAT'S GREAT THAT YOU'RE ALL BETTER! *(^o^)/* I shall rejoice
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks and I shall rejoice for you also (:
Carnation

8 Years Ago

*・゜゚・*:.。..。.:*・'(*゚▽゚*)'・*:.。. .。.:*・゜゚・*

PARTAY!!!!.. read more
Being young, learning to cope with life really does hurt sometimes , and deeply. Thing is to learn how to be comfortable in your own skin, remember, you're unique, there's nobody on the planet exactly like you. Be proud of that, and, stand your ground with pride. Your writing show great heart and spirit .. make use of both and fly .. and fly hight, love.. in time. And, just to finish my lecture (not meant as one) work on being optimistic .. pessimism gets you nowhere but the box of tissues and a dark corner!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

That's right, thanks for the inspiring message (:
I hate bullying. I have seen so many cases on it and even wrote a speech, but I can feel pain and sadness is this piece. I hope everything gets better. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading (:
Angie Diane♥♥

8 Years Ago

You are welcome
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

(:
It's so sad, yet I can truly relate to everything you have written. That feeling of someone pushing you into such a wrong direction that you just feel so damned awful.

As someone that's been through this so many times, I've come to learn that we walk on this to not please others, to not base ourselves on what others want us to be. In the end it'll just be us to determine our happiness and our future.

I do so admire your poem very much as it opens our eyes to each and everyone that has been treated this way and remind ourselves to never treat others that wrongly.

A splendid piece, indeed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for the long review (:
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Tea
It's a great piece.

I love it. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tea

8 Years Ago

your welcome again
Tea

8 Years Ago

lol
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

;D again
yet there is strength in these words....because we can not change to suit anyone else...we can only change to suit ourselves...people have to take us as we are.

jacob

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks chuu~! Sir Jacob, that is an inspiring thing to say (:
I hate bullying.
Nobody must feel stronger than the others because we have our own talent and skill. Nobody is perfect. We all have strengths and weaknesses.
Love yourself. Try not to be a pessimistic person. With that, you will not let them hurt you anymore, and they will see that you are not weak one just like before.
Check out my poem "Who Are You". That's about bullying.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Sure, I'll read that then(:

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