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A Resolution

A Resolution

A Poem by Rhianne Ney
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why

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I failed to join those top notchers
this first grading,
Surely, I was disappointed
I didn't do my best again.

I can cry,
I can mope around,
I can lock myself up,
And I can scream like a madman.

All of those things, I can do them all
But it wont change a thing,
It would just express my disappointment,
But it wont solve my problem.

This is my only way for me to be appreciated,
For my parents not too criticize my hobby,
And for them not to stop me from writing,
That's why I tried my best, but it wasn't enough.

But this is not the end,
I have three gradings left
I'll just use today's disappointment as a springboard
On reaching my goal.

© 2012 Rhianne Ney


Author's Note

Rhianne Ney
I wrote this yesterday.. any reviews... or contradictions maybe?

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Rhianne, Passing exams is a societal expectation. Great people rise above such crass things. They only show skill in rehearsing and retention of information. Of cours some can also interpret and use the information but it is no impediment to have deeper skills. And those you certainly have.

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

I will, thanks for the advice...
Talks To Trees

8 Years Ago

I agree with Mr. McFayden :)
Ruby

8 Years Ago

I agree to on this one :)



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the sentiments in these words are nigh angst driven, and it works well for this kind of poem. I can appreciate the theme as well

enjoyed it

-Dream

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the sudden review (;
Nice positive poem! You expressed your disappointment well, allowing the reader to sympa/empathize with you, but you didn't leave us feeling dejected, you gave the reader a valuable lesson at the end which we could all use. I'll keep that in mind, using my disappointmnet as a springboard for soaring higher : ). Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Oh, but thanks anyway~
Writer #00

8 Years Ago

No problem~
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Appreciated it
I just read this today. And its very appropriate since I just got my grades and Im not very happy with it. =))) Nice write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Hindi po siya separated?
Carissa Marie

8 Years Ago

Nope. Aaralin lahat ng types ng Journalism. Sports, Business, Etc. And its your choice after you gra.. read more
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Whoa, piece of information. (;
the theme is good.. dont be dissappointed but infact give it your all once out of there :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Yeah~
Muhammad Qasim

8 Years Ago

see your inbox........
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Kay
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Pax
Mr. John said it... :)
Postivism shines in this write...
and your right you can't do much of anything...
past is past... overthinking or over indulgence in it makes your progress slow...
to the point that it will not solved anything...
learning from what you lack and working on it are much better than to overthink your mistakes...
keep writing... kabayan...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, kabayan (:
Pax

8 Years Ago

your welcome :)
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

(:
I like this poem. I think you are very talented with writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for the review, it had been long since I last visited my profile
ahhh.yeah......i understand how it feels like when someone(especially the family members)..criticize our hobby for it's about studies.and what i actually hate is..i study almost everyitme(well.i actually like to study....but not for marks.for knowledge and curiosity).but still when i just buy a few minutes for doing something different.....i'm criticized.....i really don't like that...
anyway.
i like this poem and the hope you have put up throughout the verses that you can give you.r best....nice work again!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the inspiring review! ;D
"I'll just use today's dissapointment as a springboard on reaching my goal"
excellent life lesson, don't let your dissapointments bring you down, you must learn from them..and do a better job the next time around :)
keep writing, awesome poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot, Ally... God Bless (:
My question is, Is the goal yours or what another wishes for you? Stay true to yourself, for in the end you are left with yourself. I enjoyed the writing. Again I see a bit of the past in reminding me of the future. :) You are still growing, much more ahead to grasp within your pen. Let it not rest as I did when young.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

thanks I will keep writing (:
Rhianne, Passing exams is a societal expectation. Great people rise above such crass things. They only show skill in rehearsing and retention of information. Of cours some can also interpret and use the information but it is no impediment to have deeper skills. And those you certainly have.

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

I will, thanks for the advice...
Talks To Trees

8 Years Ago

I agree with Mr. McFayden :)
Ruby

8 Years Ago

I agree to on this one :)

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