Words that remain unspoken

Words that remain unspoken

A Poem by Rhianne Ney
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something I came up while I was waiting for my sis

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I sneaked out from the hospital to see you,
This is the fourth time and maybe the last time
I know how happy you are now,
I'm glad that you moved on.

You already cleared your head of me,
Now you're holding hands with another,
I'm happy to see your genuine smile once again,
I'm glad that you moved on.

I have to let you go, I hope you understand
I don't have much time left,
So would you please...
Continue smiling for me?

© 2012 Rhianne Ney


Author's Note

Rhianne Ney
it's not my feelings... I just wrote it...

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D: So tragic sounding... It makes me think of a girl just standing out in the rain, watching her ex run around with a new girlfriend, all smiley and giggly and stuff... And she's doing her best to be happy for them... *sniffle* This is so powerfully written...Well done. *respectful applause*

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Hey there, emma, thanks a lot for reviewing. Are you still okay with Giotto? *laughs
Emma Lee-Riviera

9 Years Ago

Ahaha yeah. ;)



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Right... Well romantic poems that I wrote aren't my feelings either but just write it anyway.. I like your poem though.. It's cute!
Keep writing!
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous Girl

9 Years Ago

I know you have!! Miss you too... I have been waiting for next chapter of your book ^^
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

It's out, I've sent it to you, sorry for the short time... see you again after, I'll read your book .. read more
Anonymous Girl

9 Years Ago

Haha... thanks and will talk again for sure :):):)
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Pax
written somewhat out of the blue....
a lonely place of moving on...
a goodbye of someone in the past..

Great!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Salamat po sa nakaka-inspire na review
D: So tragic sounding... It makes me think of a girl just standing out in the rain, watching her ex run around with a new girlfriend, all smiley and giggly and stuff... And she's doing her best to be happy for them... *sniffle* This is so powerfully written...Well done. *respectful applause*

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Hey there, emma, thanks a lot for reviewing. Are you still okay with Giotto? *laughs
Emma Lee-Riviera

9 Years Ago

Ahaha yeah. ;)
It takes a strong heart to ask that. Then again, it takes a stronger heart to continue smiling with such confusing feelings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thank you so much for reviewing, i'll make it up to you sometime ^_^
Emotional write. Moving

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks :D
A poem that many can relate to. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

Glad you can relate ;D thanks
Ohh, this one elicits a pensive, shadowed mood-thought. Is this person in hospital because they are not long for this world? Are they referring to one that they were close to and because of their "condition" have since drifted apart? Are they happy for them because they have found someone to take their place; when they will, in due time, no longer be there for them? Let us ponder this one a bit more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

The poem is not based on my feelings... something that I came up on a whim...
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

9 Years Ago

Ah, I wondered if that's what you meant but somehow it just didn't soak in. Thanks! :)
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
great write ....i enjoyed it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you do ;D
Great work once again Rhianne! I really like the last stanza, it's brilliant :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot for reading O:
love yah
Allycat

9 Years Ago

no problem :D

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Baguio City, the city of cold temperature, Philippines



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