Words that remain unspoken

something I came up while I was waiting for my sis

I sneaked out from the hospital to see you,
This is the fourth time and maybe the last time
I know how happy you are now,
I'm glad that you moved on.

You already cleared your head of me,
Now you're holding hands with another,
I'm happy to see your genuine smile once again,
I'm glad that you moved on.

I have to let you go, I hope you understand
I don't have much time left,
So would you please...
Continue smiling for me?

Author's Note

it's not my feelings... I just wrote it...

Reviews

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

D: So tragic sounding... It makes me think of a girl just standing out in the rain, watching her ex run around with a new girlfriend, all smiley and giggly and stuff... And she's doing her best to be happy for them... *sniffle* This is so powerfully written...Well done. *respectful applause*

[Rhianne Ney]

Hey there, emma, thanks a lot for reviewing. Are you still okay with Giotto? *laughs

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Ahaha yeah. ;)

[Mia]

This is beautiful. It’s remarkable that you can write something was so much emotion without having experienced it or the emotions. Your imagination is crazy, the good kind.

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the review! (:

[Mia]

It was such a pleasure :)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're kind ;D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It. Is interesting that you can magic poetry from your imagination rather from emotion or experience. Still there is emotion in this piece. Very creative! Easy read, flows well.

[Rhianne Ney]

I know it lacks emotion because I didn't experience it,,, but wait til I get a boyfriend.. just kidding

[Pencrafter]

Your poem shows how true love can be proven by a self-sacrificing attitude. Well done!

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks a lot for the review! ;D

[TheAdamBryant]

woohooo nice poem

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I did like the desire of the poem. To create some kind of peace. A nice story in the poem with a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks Mr. Coyote...
Glad for you to stop by! ;D

[gombeggar]

interesting emote in the words even if it's not how u feel

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks a lot for reviewing! I appreciate it ;D

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Reminds me of paper planes again though I know it's different. Hahaha it's funny cause this is how I feel with you know who but lol I'm not dying hehehe

Anyway nice write :)

[Rhianne Ney]

lol... I can see it as Paper planes... Gosh! I'm attached to Paper Planes! ;D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

muhahaha it's just its a really sweet song K3 it hehehe I was just watching some of dem vocaloids hehehe try and watch first love academy

[Rhianne Ney]

napanood ko na un nga ang gusto ko sanang irequest eh... Tapos ko nang napanood yun noon pa lol

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

haha nakita ko kasi na may doujinshi sa DA ;)

[Rhianne Ney]

Haha ang cute non

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

sobra hehehe ilagay nga sa phone hahaha