This Madness

This Madness

A Poem by Rhianne Ney
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“This Madness”

Let me divulge myself with this madness

Fill my heart with darkness

I’ll scream with loneliness

Wrap myself with sadness.

 

Fill my heart with darkness

I’ll ignore beauty and love the ugly

The demons will grip me

Yet I will let madness overwhelm me.

 

I’ll scream with loneliness

Hear the echoes of my pitiful cries

The wind will carry my shattered pieces

Pass it with a slow, haunting sound.

 

Wrap myself with sadness

Don’t look at me with pity

I’ll still return to the normal me.

Just now let me release this.

© 2013 Rhianne Ney


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Rhianne Ney
Here a new poem (:

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Random?? I liked the way you constructed this piece. For random .. I wish I could do that at random. (sorry I'm still blinking about that note at the top ;) Very intense and powerful..I like the differences of the words as well. Almost as if they are equal, as to stand out from their descriptions, but neither is equal to the other. This may sound odd but I can taste the bitterness while reading through this piece too...I liked this poem very much...one can connect to it on more than one level. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

(; Thanks for the review, appreciated it



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i can totally relate to this. It's deep and touching. Totally worth reading

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love this poem. I can relate to it especially the ending part.

Wrap myself with sadness,
Don't look at me with pity,
I'll still return to the normal me,
Just now let me release this.

Kaze~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Your welcome. :-)
The idea of crossing out the word sadness was nicely done. I liked the last stanza the best, because it fits me best.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

(: I'm glad about that
love it! Just let me be me........

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review (:
Oh I like this one, give in to the darkness so that light can show through the cracks...like the format too, it's off kilter, which makes it just a little more uncomfortable a place to reside. Brava, well done this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Madam
Random?? I liked the way you constructed this piece. For random .. I wish I could do that at random. (sorry I'm still blinking about that note at the top ;) Very intense and powerful..I like the differences of the words as well. Almost as if they are equal, as to stand out from their descriptions, but neither is equal to the other. This may sound odd but I can taste the bitterness while reading through this piece too...I liked this poem very much...one can connect to it on more than one level. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

(; Thanks for the review, appreciated it
This was very well expressed emotionally.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review (:
Profound. Well penned. Enjoyed.
~pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Patricia (:
Amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review (:

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