Mirage of Freedom

Mirage of Freedom

A Poem by Vria P Crow
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"Reflection of perfection..."

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Reflection of  Perfection

is behind the mirage

of


F R E E  D O M E.


We crave

Power.


We need

Love.

I remember the Quaker;
he was a Baker,

my William Penn.


© 2013 Vria P Crow


Author's Note

Vria P Crow
Dear Cafe,

This is a tribute to Independence Day of yesterday.

PHOTOGRAPH BY ME: http://riaverobenthil.deviantart.com/art/Mirage-of-Freedom-383098805
Sin cerely,

Ria

p.s. Here is to my brother who served two years in Afghanistan and Iraq.




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Perfection is indeed a mirage - and a waste of energy. Improvement - personal best - honesty. These are what we should strive for. The Quaker standards of honest hard work and respect for all life are about as close to perfect as I want to get! Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Rita! This is exactly what I was striving for :) I feel as though I have accomp.. read more
One can be impeccable without striving for perfection. Thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing:D Perfection does not exist my mind. However, we can always pursue improve.. read more
Brandon S. Whitten

10 Years Ago

you are welcome

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Added on July 6, 2013
Last Updated on July 6, 2013
Tags: reflection, free, dome, power, independence, love

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Vria P Crow
Vria P Crow

Salix's Burrow, ME



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Dear WritersCafe, Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Vria P Crow. I was known as Ria Vero Benthil but I've finally chosen my main pen name as Vria. I am a Wiccan lady that studies whit.. more..

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