This piece reads like you are reminiscing about the good in a bad situation, whilst also being reminded that they are ghosts for a reason. They still are ghosts, as your writing suggests that they still linger in your thoughts, long after they are gone. Maybe it is the excitement of the danger you miss, the adrenaline rush of feeling so alive, yet those are the memories and you chose this reality over it, or was it chosen for you?
Interesting write, even if I am way off, it provokes thought and packs a punch too.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you again! Your reviews are filled with perspective. You are not far off and actually pretty.. read moreThank you again! Your reviews are filled with perspective. You are not far off and actually pretty spot on with your interpretations.
Hey Ria, first I admit that I read this purely because of the title and I'm glad I did. I also what to tell you that this has a solid lyrical vibe the repetition lends to it...like serious props on that!
Cerebral ghost, super! I think we all have those gnawing away at us or maybe they're just the things we regret. I like this one a bunch. R xo
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you always for your compliments! I appreciate them immensely.
This piece reads like you are reminiscing about the good in a bad situation, whilst also being reminded that they are ghosts for a reason. They still are ghosts, as your writing suggests that they still linger in your thoughts, long after they are gone. Maybe it is the excitement of the danger you miss, the adrenaline rush of feeling so alive, yet those are the memories and you chose this reality over it, or was it chosen for you?
Interesting write, even if I am way off, it provokes thought and packs a punch too.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you again! Your reviews are filled with perspective. You are not far off and actually pretty.. read moreThank you again! Your reviews are filled with perspective. You are not far off and actually pretty spot on with your interpretations.
In what ever we do there is always crazy so when we stop doing the things we love the crazy stops and there is something about the craziness that we miss so much.
Gives me the feeling of such vastness offered through the internet and the life of an onlooker, I do like this a lot, your usual clever articulation is inspiring...would love to see this as a short story, definitely! x
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Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Vria P Crow. I was known as Ria Vero Benthil but I've finally chosen my main pen name as Vria. I am a Wiccan lady that studies whit.. more..