Creeping Lonliness

Creeping Lonliness

A Poem by TheRibZ

As my loneliness creeps,
Tears melt away
I, a shadow and no more
Strive to reach the next day

Silence, with chaotic noises
Sublime with the spirit of filth,
I am alone.

In a drunken disguise
I replace my grieving with more wine
Nothing would heal
But it surely helps
Ease the pain
All in vain
I die again.

© 2008 TheRibZ


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wow. i haven't felt pain in the longest time for most undesirable reasons. but here, i can truly empathise with you. having spent most of my life in the abyss of such hollow numbness, i know... :) keep writing :)) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes I try the beer and wine. Bad part we must awake with the pain of too much drink. A excellent poem. In some death we wake up wiser and smarter.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh, the despair of a human is so compelling.
I love this piece, I truly do.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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TheRibZ

Beirut, Lebanon



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