Situation Critical

Situation Critical

A Poem by Meghan Atziri

A critic's talking now.
I'll tell you the rules, and what I allow.
My world has no power, government or money
which brightened up our lives
and kept our minds open and sunny.
The quality of equality stays fresh in the head
and the burden of time
usually ends up dead.
The unforgettable have forgotten
and the stress has uplifted;
the minds of the clones
have surely all shifted.
Yet this critic is criticized 
by her fellow people and fellow folk...
Forget it, there's no way.
This dream is nothing but a joke.

© 2014 Meghan Atziri


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Added on July 7, 2014
Last Updated on July 7, 2014
Tags: critical, critics, judgment, power, government, equality, unforgettable, people, folk, joke, poem

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Meghan Atziri
Meghan Atziri

Danville, CA



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My name is Meghan, I'm 18 living in the bay area of California. I would write more about myself but I'm not too into identifying with myself :) I'm a free spirit, Gemini, Cancer moon and Libra rising... more..

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