The FLIRT! (sassy fun)

The FLIRT! (sassy fun)

A Poem by Richard🖌
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Kaduta … try one, it's fun! 😃 (see instructions in Author's Note)

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© 2023 Richard🖌


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Author's Note

Richard🖌
"Kaduta"
An original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins © 17 Nov 2006
A Katuda ("Falling" in Italian) is a poem about any topic, composed in a minimum of at least one 6-line verse of 3 Rhyming Couplets, but no limit to number of verses.
Alignment: Author’s Choice
Syllable Counts Per Line: 2/2/2/2/9 (5-4)/9 (5-4)
Rhyme Scheme: aa, bb, c-c, c-c
(for additional verses, use: dd, ee, f-f, f-f etc)

Illustration: Bus Stop Pin Up Beauty © by Baron Gerald Von Lind

Well-meant critique and constructive comments are always welcome! : )

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perfect name for the form, it read as falling leaves, slowly one by one, two by two... then it is stacked at the end like the leaves under the tree, nice and naughty, a good smile we need sometimes, thank You for sharing both Your form and the sweet little cutie too.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Dear Gh!
A "smile" is the perfect announcement for that which you've spread across this olde .. read more



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Hey richard, your poems always bring me a smile

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

3 Years Ago

Ah, Cassie Sweet 😏
And, your reviews always soften my heart.

Thank you, Dea.. read more
My family tells me all the time I'm a natural flirt

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

3 Years Ago

MMmmm, Hazel 🤒
What a lovely thought … I feel it!

Thanks for the lovely r.. read more
This is wonderful and fun, nicely written

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Kay-T,

For the nice compliments … much appreciated! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Unspoken poet

3 Years Ago

not a problem
One of the most playful pieces I’ve seen from you, altho it’s been a long time since I read you. I clicked on this one becuz I was hoping to get a read that’s more upbeat & fun. Every word is well-crafted for wordplay & meaning. This is exactly the kind of poem I most enjoy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

How wonderful to see ya, Margie! : )
Glad you found one to your liking and enjoyment … that.. read more
A saucy little number you have cooked up here Richard. Delightful little read and the flirty image looks just like Liz taylor to me in her younger days. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Greetings, Chris! : )
Thanks for the great review.
Hey, she does sorta favor a young L.. read more
A wonderful cheeky rhyme which painted a picture in my mind of the subject, loved this!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Hi, Madeira Sweet!
How I ever missed you charing review I do not know.
It so pleases t.. read more
I love the garter and the stockings just as much as I love the form of this. A little sass is a good attribute, don't you think?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

If/when applied to You, absolutely! ; )

Thanks, Kelly✨ ⁓ Richard
Since you thought I should try this form...here it is! LOL part 2 of your little flirty piece!

Red drinks
Two clinks
That gaze
Ablaze!
Sensation's engross, come hold me close,
till lover's repose... beckons curled toes!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Susan 🦋

5 Years Ago

I have a great teacher :-)
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

"B L U S H!"
Susan 🦋

5 Years Ago

ughh thanks you..
Like the pin up

who/what was she

she could be anything

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Me, too!
Why, "she" was the inspiration for this flirty poem … what else? LOL!

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ahahahaha what a flirt indeed ...i was captivated and charmed my friend! great read and congrats on the creative form sir!
E.
ps. what a pic!!!! ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Thanks a zillion, Dear Gene!
That you'd cotton to that sweet lil' pic … enough to curl a gu.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

you are too kind my friend! and thanks for the blessing ..i accept!!!! ;) and right back at ya!

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