winter song (Haiku)

winter song (Haiku)

A Poem by Richard🖌
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winter song ( Haiku )

© 2020 Richard🖌


Author's Note

Richard🖌
Ryukyu (roo-cue) Minivet, a beautiful songbird native to Japan.
Its song is a number of soft chirps, followed by a bright tinkling twitter.
Its feathers are from dark blue-gray to black and pure white.
Their activities foretell of an early or late winter.

Constructively intended critique is always welcome! ✍

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Featured Review

Thank you for the knowledge and the amazing poetry Richard. The Native Americans watched the birds. when the bird were hidden and silence. They knew. Big storm was coming. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

10 Months Ago

Hi, my good friend, John🍺

What a joy it is to receive the wisdom of your words upo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

You are welcome Richard. I always enjoy your work.



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Very nice Richard. Haiku reminds me of imagist poets like Ezra Pound. One thing for me I have found the fewer the words the more difficult the poem to write. I have finally finished a ten-line poem that I have rewritten easily 100 times trying to force it into a syllabic pattern of 3/2 per stanza. It only succeeded when I expanded the lines to 5 syllables, which contracted the total number of lines but allowed addition of necessary lines.
Anyway, I salute your ability with condensed thought. Tomodachi.
Winston

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Months Ago

Hi, Ichi-dan Winstonsan ⛩️

It's a distinct blessing to receive your words in revi.. read more
I really like the complete presentation you created for this piece. The art, your poem and your chop together are elegant, and feel authentic to the form and culture. I hope this hangs on your wall. If not, it should. I would hang it!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Months Ago

Thank you so very much, Bill 🙏

It is quite enjoyable to receive such a positive, r.. read more
Ah what a sweet, wonderful Haiku, This was an amazing read. Enjoyed

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

7 Months Ago

Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady WG 🌾

Your kind compliments and expression of enjoym.. read more
Beautifully written! I love Haiku poems!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

7 Months Ago

Most humbly, I bow. 🙏

And, I love poetesses who come to read, enjoy, and praise my.. read more
KAREN

7 Months Ago

You're welcome!
Such a beautiful little gem of a write, what a wonderful songbird.
I love the sound of a Bobwhite...
wonderful write here

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Lady Lessa🌿

Your words are such lovely touches 'pon a poet's grateful h.. read more
Thank you for explaining the word in the last stanza, This is just so LOVELY....


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

8 Months Ago

Thank you, too, Poetess🍂

For selecting this brief Senryu homage to Wintertime, for.. read more
This is so lovely Richard. I enjoyed this write.
I love the layout, wish i knew how to format a write like that.
Awesome

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

8 Months Ago

Warmest Winter greetings, Lady Kimmie ❄️

It is so very nice to enjoy your sweet w.. read more
Unspoken poet

8 Months Ago

thank you so much
Richard🖌

8 Months Ago

Most humbly, I bow⁓*
Enjoyed reading this and the information that goes along with it..
and, the picture...

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

9 Months Ago

Arigatōgozaimasu, Lisa-san ⛩️

I am so very happy you enjoyed this informative li.. read more

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