'Unshy me'

a poem about the unique connection and interaction that builds up between two people from the first time they meet each other even though one is particularly reserved.

She walks towards me,
her face as beautiful as can be,
this stranger is pure elegance,
but i am not the kind to be too moved by appearance.

I tried to show no emotion.
I believed myself a master of composure.
but in this moment it was no necessity,
just a mask for my timidity.

Her smile makes me smile,
her words fill me with passion,
I am amazed by her nonchalance
I think its her greatest weapon.

'unshy' me dear stranger,
set my heart on a new kind of fire.
stay with me awhile longer.
in your presence I seem to lose my reserve.

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

It is GREAT! I loved loved loved reading it. I love the stanza "She walks towards me,
her face as beautiful as can be,
this stranger is pure elegance,
but i am not the kind to be too moved by appearance. "
Amazing work. Keep writing want to read more of your work. I love the emotions that you put in this Poem so true and Beautiful. Love it. Thank You for sharing such a GREAT PIECE

[Passengerr]

Thanks Dreamer, really appreciate.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Your WELCOME :)

[613]

You told a story that I followed easily. Your choice of descriptive words was great. My favorite stanza is the last one.

Well done.

- Brittney

[Passengerr]

thank you:-)

[613]

You're welcome!

[Lydia Shutter]

That connection is electric....and it is mesmerizing! You have described the scene to perfection. Lydi**

[Passengerr]

bless you Lydi.

[J.S. Kloss]

This is amazing! I love that you decided to write about this feeling and you did it so excellently! My favorite line stood out immediately, and it's: "I think it's her greatest weapon." I never really considered how nonchalance could be a weapon, but it definitely is and the people that possess it are so lucky!

[Passengerr]

they certainly are Kloss. thanks once again:-).

[Nicki]

This was a great poem! You always put so much emotion into it and I liked the rhyme scheme if this one!

[Passengerr]

glad you liked it Nicki.

[Lavender Soya]

This one's written with passion and deep affection. I love how the elements of this poem agree with each other. Kudos my friend! You've made my day. :-) See you around.

[Passengerr]

thanks Lavender, you too.

[Haley Wilson]

This is so sweet and adorable! It really embodies the essence of how one feels when they meet someone who they're attracted to, almost instantly. And that connection can build up into something stronger. Something intimate. Wonderful work!

[Passengerr]

Thanks, that's the idea i had in mind.