Candyapple Carpet Ride (a rat's eye view)A Poem by Rikkevi RueAn attempt at a freer verse...Candyapple Carpet Ride (A rat’s eye view) 15
Sep 2011 Starkly exotic enrapt divine she leapt into my land of rhyme “Do you mind?” ...MY mind, so democratic, neh eso-cratic! such ordered thinking, the structured lines devoted adherent, traditions kind... not what you THINK this ink that chronicles, my style passe like monocles? my tabernacle not a pinnacle? umbilical or stuck like barnacles a musaic carbuncle? She's a demi- (goddess), her "Odd-ess" SPLIT! her pneumatic wit fit, with diamond bit drill that finds and mines... invasive-primed, unrequited Queen of free-ryhme on spinal tap her rare cerebral sap azure psyche-transmitter ocean her polished sea shell dreams warm salty tidal themes…. with craft so fine, her time is quantum… universal conscious-wanton in attitude that little skirt, so "innocent" that smile, relaxes and beguiles... Ahha! the temptress to divert, creative dirt, creative hurt, revert inert creative flirt, beget creative spurt! Into my mind then a serpent to my Eden slithered resistance wither, my aghast-ly jaw a-dither seductively round my mensa coiling circuits foiling, frozen stiff emotions boiling spoiling years of lessons, toiling...toiling... with joy I'm roiling, roiling... oh-so employing, horizons cloying restraints destroying, freedom enjoying! "The gig is down" she said, her finger pointing up instead, well up as I thought it not it, "whassup?" I said, her head, turning seductive smile there burning "Here the poles reverse, yo re-"verse," no worse see your down is up perhaps down under if Asian persuasions support your blunder an "up" not yearning for free rhyme learning?!
“Down here my friend though you upside down hang the slang may pang yo thang that is if'n y'all got-some, be a pos-sum, who sleeps not um... the sub see is conscious so jus' pretend, a rodent a bat is not a cat is more that, more like a rat, above” "Year of?" I said "Don't defend! You'll end the trend... inverse CREATE! To send” she said, to dangle, rodents angle upside down is right side up untangle, your wits must spangle when on the other side, here bottom is top and top is a reversal rehearsal without a script the rats-words singing, clinging, bringing your ink to slap words down around to wrap you- son! ink backwards run you must equip this mindset dip, that where it's at- a rodents trip! persuasion flip! To fill that stagnant cavity with naught of mental gravity, in style be hip, let tethers slip, your boundaries rip, apprehensions...ZIP! But as i rose my house was shaken Shakespeare-GONE, a lonely shelf Poe no longer by himself a dove there cooed, but no more Raven Yeats was dull, and Spencer craven Dylan Thomas lost his passion Robert Frost the followed path took Dickerson was stilted-jaded Coleridge (no surpise) had faded poems of Pope became soft-hearted the joy of Kipling fast departed... the past unstarted, uncharted, de-smarted so hearted empty hearted, familiar path I parted. But
fertile is as fertile does and
when in Rome…intrigued I was! This
new terrain demands exploring deploring,
cowards constant clinging solid
ground, adventure singing, bringing a
gift worth bringing… In
her enchanted stream I floated, gloated
all this I’ve missed! conscious-less
revolving-ness -my altered bliss, the
scheme it seems, selenes
fair dream, artistic
soda fountain fellows marshmellows
dipped in cream bondage
fleeted, justice meted, fetters cloven, woven into
flowing juices, sluices from
imaginations teathered
uses the
gushing forth of sheer release, all
boundaries cease, the
antiquated well turned verse, a
curse, to tame- imaginations
tireless bane, creations
drain… so
rise above this yoke replete and
breath a higher air so sweet here
on this side we meet fair
Deme. Rikkevi
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