chance

As I sit, watching the sun touch the hill,

I know I am not the same...

I may look the same,

But I am not-

For-

Gone is the violence,

So long to rob my soul of peace.

Reviews

[Vaishali..^_^]

ah..!!It's truly beautiful...
and I loved it very much..!! because most of the time I also keep wondering that I'm not the same..!!and after reading this i felt as in u wrote it with my point of view..:)
thanks for sharing..:)

Vaishali.. ^_^

[MagiCrystal]

Precisely what I need it to heard all day, thank you, Peace!
and the rest a dust in the Wind.
Thank you~

[Legion]

Short. But a tranquil presence within. I would like to see a bit more of the past that the character in this piece finally had to let go of to take back his/her soul. One thing to change is in the second line. You use "the" twice before "same...".

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

isn't this a re-assuring piece that we all need..thank you !

[SK Woodiwiss]

A sigh. A lovely sigh, to me, both resolved and relieved. Thank you