Hope

Hope

A Poem by Ripple of Aqua
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Inspired: Light up the sky by The Afters

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Times are tough
But the melody still plays

 Like broken record
 Or the stars in the sky

Forever there
Never to fear

 Clouds may cover it
 Only to change into silver

 From the light in the far corner
 To the brightest star in the galaxy

It still remains
To bring travelers home

Forever saving the ones who believe
Salvation quickly steps at its side
 
Tangled in thorns
And the blade will help you

Open your eyes
And your mind

Can you see it?

The melody that plays on
And the silver that lines the sky
Hope is all around.
We mustn't forget this.

 Tears fall from our eyes
 As our sacrifices are created into victories
 
We all must call out
 Her army has assembled

Full of pride
 We walk in white and silver

Lighting up the heavens.

© 2012 Ripple of Aqua


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Ripple of Aqua
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this is a magnificent piece Kt! You sure have a talent of modulating your tone in order to give a kind of sincere poignancy or vividness or even jollyness in each of your poems...I'm awed how you manage it!
I'm reminded of an old saying...every cloud has a silver lining...

Brilliant I have to say again!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love this! Amazing write. I think in the first line you meant to say 'tough' not toug.
Like I said I love this piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is simply beautiful and enjoyable to read. Nice job again. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is amazing! It's so beautiful and inspiring! I got chills as I read it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Uplifitng and inspiring!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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this is awesome! I really enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this was a great poem i loved it keep up the good work..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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i love this, it makes me feel like there is still...well...hope for those that are unhappy. great job! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a magnificent piece Kt! You sure have a talent of modulating your tone in order to give a kind of sincere poignancy or vividness or even jollyness in each of your poems...I'm awed how you manage it!
I'm reminded of an old saying...every cloud has a silver lining...

Brilliant I have to say again!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww this is so sweet, It gave me chills.
I like how you've portrayed Hope as a woman near the end, it's an interesting interpretation.
Beautiful poem, a pleasure to read.
:)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 12, 2011
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Tags: Melody, hope, Silver lining, tears, open, Salvation

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