Piano's Breath

Piano's Breath

A Poem by Ripple of Aqua
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Inspiration: Gioni's The Day

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Water trickles lowly in your ears
Grass bends in the light wind

The slight keys of the piano twirl in the air
Enveloping around you as you wander

The sky is yellow and red
Reflecting colors match the dotting trees all around

Damp Earth lays beneath your padding feet
Nothing is a barrier here

Things might have distracted me once,
You think, as the piano pauses

But the water still moves quickly over the pebbled stones
And no one knows where you are

Nothing can harm you
Peace is here

Grass up to your knees,
Branches down to your reach

Silence sings in the melody of the piano
Joyous but quiet in it's jubilant pride

Yes a wonderful place you have found yourself,
Especially when only you are bound to be here once more.

This piano's breath is what gives you the power
Power to see
Power to imagine
Power to know
And power to protect

Take advantage of this great and mighty beauty of the world.

© 2012 Ripple of Aqua


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Very vivid imagery and you display a meaningful message. Tis a shame what the world has come to now a days with roads and housing developments everywhere, you capture natural beauty like the land free of human destruction. It also flows well and I have to say I am impressed. Nice work :D

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very vivd and nice write i like it

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Interesting poem. Great!

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such powerful imagery!

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Awesome imagery......Great write.....Whisk

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very vivid imagery and you display a meaningful message. Tis a shame what the world has come to now a days with roads and housing developments everywhere, you capture natural beauty like the land free of human destruction. It also flows well and I have to say I am impressed. Nice work :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Nice piece with wonderful imagery and a good message. Many forsake the beauty of the world and take it for granted at times. Man has terribly abused the world and now it looks the way it does today and even still, today there is still beauty to be found in this dying world. Great piece my friend and well written

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i liked this a lot :) the imagery is very cool

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This is a poem that is metaphorically very rich,I especially like the line ...Damp Earth lays beneath your padding feet.Great.Like the musical (literary) background.
Good work

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