Piano's Breath

Piano's Breath

A Poem by Ripple of Aqua
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Inspiration: Gioni's The Day

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Water trickles lowly in your ears
Grass bends in the light wind

The slight keys of the piano twirl in the air
Enveloping around you as you wander

The sky is yellow and red
Reflecting colors match the dotting trees all around

Damp Earth lays beneath your padding feet
Nothing is a barrier here

Things might have distracted me once,
You think, as the piano pauses

But the water still moves quickly over the pebbled stones
And no one knows where you are

Nothing can harm you
Peace is here

Grass up to your knees,
Branches down to your reach

Silence sings in the melody of the piano
Joyous but quiet in it's jubilant pride

Yes a wonderful place you have found yourself,
Especially when only you are bound to be here once more.

This piano's breath is what gives you the power
Power to see
Power to imagine
Power to know
And power to protect

Take advantage of this great and mighty beauty of the world.

© 2012 Ripple of Aqua


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Very vivid imagery and you display a meaningful message. Tis a shame what the world has come to now a days with roads and housing developments everywhere, you capture natural beauty like the land free of human destruction. It also flows well and I have to say I am impressed. Nice work :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a beautiful write. I love the scenery you have placed in my mind- a serene environment. It really makes me appreciate what is around me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is beautiul, I can imagine the piano playing in the background and the song just taking you to this joyful place. You have managed to create an entire atmosphere with just your words and the picture alone. I admire that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love that this is just beautiful and enjoyable to read. Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very descreptive. You've opened up a new world to me. Your are really good at this. You develop a picture that kept my attention. It's beautiful every word that runs through my mind. Speechless.
I adore it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

brilliant :) I love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and serene! It pulls you into a wonderful weaving of word play. Very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is You! I knew you were in here somewhere. Good to be introduced to you! Love the poem too! Insperational and I since a bit of melancholy as well, or is that just me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand how much you value my attachments Kt :) Thank you! (blush)

These words shall stay forever in my mind...they are beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Amazing poem. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow! This is amazing! I could really paint a picture in my head. So beautiful! I would add it to my favorites if I knew how!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on July 17, 2011
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