Pizza D'oh!

Don't ask...

The pizza doe, she is a dear,

she never forgets to go bye.

She’s been kneading a raze;

for good grain she preys,

she’s tired of disfigured pi. 

Author's Note

What is wrong with me today? ;P

Reviews

[s y e]

Ooooooh, Rita -- I really want Pizza but I can't eat it, I have a sore throat and a chest infection... >.< Reading this made me so hungry, guess I'm stuck with tomato soup, lol.

Amazing read!

[Rita L. Sev]

Tomato soup is yummy, too... :) This was just a burst of utter silliness one day - glad you liked it. Thanks, Noodle!

[SyberRose]

this is really cute...who doesnt love pizza...nice one Rita:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Some silly wordplay that day... :) Thanks, Rose!

[Angel]

Semantic Antics...my favorite game.
Cute

[Rita L. Sev]

That's exactly what it was - just a bit of play! Thanks, Angel!

[Angel]

I love that game...and you play it so well!!

[ANTO]

Theres no topping this Rita ;)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Thanks!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what wonderful double meaning....i worked in pizza for about 30 years...

i kneaded more dough...but didn't get it.

so i left ....

i felt disfigured by all those years, but did enjoy the pi,,,when i had one.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! I remember going to Colonial Williamsburg as a child, and there was a sign saying that a woman (can't recall who) "Kneaded the dough 'cause she needed the bread"... Took my mom a while to explain it to me, but that was the beginning of my love of wordplay. Thanks so much, Jacob!

[Angi]

I'm with Frieda! What have you been drinkin'?! Ha! I am so tired, I had to really think about what I was reading. Cute, cute, Ms. English teacher!

[Rita L. Sev]

Water all day, I promise! (until now...) I think this odd wordplay phase is out of my system - I didn't quite get it myself! Thanks, Angi!

[Jack...]

I think you are hungry. But your poetry is still wonderful any way you slice it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for that tasty piece of praise, Jack! :)

[quinfinn]

said the dough to the baker...it's so nice to be kneaded.....you're on a roll....this is not the yeast entertaining of your writes....it really gets to the crust of things. well done!

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! I knew you would rise to the occasion! Thanks, Quin. I was in a weird wordplay mood today... :)

[quinfinn]

i do so love the wordplay.....pray, do indulge us further....

[Jack V.]

lol, I love it. This makes me "lol." Thank you.

[Rita L. Sev]

Glad to give a laugh! Thank you!

[Jack V.]

Thanks for that. Makes the heart happy.