Sorrow

Six word story #1

Dad's demise: Diagnosis came. Treatment failed.

Reviews

[mickeroo]

Hemmingway would be proud.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Mickeroo

[Ed Hart]

sunset sorrow...life, oh life, oh precious life, and death, the journey home, amen

[Rita L. Sev]

Amen indeed. Thank you, Ed.

[Samuel Dickens]

It's a bummer. The same thing happened with my oldest sister.

[Rita L. Sev]

Bummer to the nth degree...

[Marie]

Loss, Grief. Faith. Hope. Heaven waits...

[Rita L. Sev]

That is my prayer, Marie. Thank you.

[Cassie]

So sad to learn of the demise

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Cassie

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, this is truly sorrow in its rawest form!! This one hits me in the stomach with reality!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Sheila.

[Angi]

Sad, sad, Rita! So, so much in six little words. Angi~

[Rita L. Sev]

I think if I had to say this in more than six words, I could not have done it... Thanks, Angi

[ShelleyA]

Oh Rita. This one pulls on your heartstrings. Deep expression of emotion. A sad story of loss. Poignant. Excellent brevity. Well penned.

[Rita L. Sev]

This one came all too easily... Thank you, Shelley

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome, Rita.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god, this is so sad, Rita...

six words that really penetrate the heart.

so sorry.

jacob

[Rita L. Sev]

Ten years doesn't change the facts, or the sadness. Thanks, Jacob.