Trust and Will

Trust and Will

A Poem by Rita L. Sev



I trust Eventuality

Live every bit of Now

Infinite in Prospect

Yet it seems somehow

The Over and Over and Over

Looks very much the same

Until I will the Universe

To switch around the Game

© 2016 Rita L. Sev

Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Cleaning out the house, and came across this one from 2012. It applies even more now, as I am switching up the game these days...

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Succinct and positive. I like your sense of the reality of the present and the idealism of a promise of a better tomorrow if you wish to make it so.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I like this it's very good. You describe how we learn to trust and try to live in the moment as much as we can until we get sick of the ho-hum and make things change. Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I liked the poem very much but I have Two notes, First you kept the rhyme for the first Four lines then you dropped it in the rest.
2nd, instead of "The Over and Over and Over" you should write "the over and over and again" in my personal opinion it would keep up with the rest.

its great work and I would love to read more

Posted 4 Years Ago

Rita L. Sev

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments, Haseo. I stuck with a rhyme pattern, but I know the syllable rhythm is .. read more

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Added on May 30, 2016
Last Updated on May 30, 2016


Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA

PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE "FRIENDING" ME: I am happy to be sharing my poems (and occasional stories) and thrilled to be reading fellow authors. About Friend Requests - It is wise to READ some of .. more..

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A Poem by Rita L. Sev