Seeing Through

Are you so sure when i kiss your lips

the lips i kiss are yours alone

or are they more then just a cure

for the boredom of my day?

 

Are you sure when i smile

that smile that finds you

is for the pleasantry of what you are

and not someone im seeing through

 

Are you confident that the hand that grasps you hair

is the one that strokes you with fondness

or is the touch just a phantom of the times

set in a rhythm to sooth it's idle soul

 

Are you positive that the eyes that trail

are the eyes that know you well

or is it the eyes that paint the portrait of another on your bones

bound to make you more enticing

 

Are you smitten with the thought that i love you

With those smiling eyes and soft grazing hands in all their needy grasping

or are you pretending in the way i do

It might be true..

 

Your looking at her while im looking at him

while your looking at me and im looking at you

Reviews

[Black-Draped]

this is really gooood! lotsa emotion in each sentence!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this is an amazing poem...i love the emotion behind it...i like the the lines "are you positive that the eyes that trail ;are the eyes that you know well " and "your looking at her while im looking at him ; while your looking at me and im looking at you"...!!!