idk

idk

A Poem by Robbie
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a poem about nothing

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The dog told me to do it.

I begged him not to force me.

His mind was so powerful.

I could not beat him.

He spoke to me with a strong tone in his voice.

Should I listen to him and live?

Should I not listen and be alone?

idk...

© 2008 Robbie


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Robbie
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haha loved it

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow that was.... so interesting. I do not understand fully but was the dog trying to convince you to mark your territory?

Posted 16 Years Ago


I always like pieces like this;
open-ended, appreciate for what it is kind of things.
it gives the reader the ability to perceive it as they choose to.

Posted 16 Years Ago


XD lol nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 16, 2008

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San Antonio, TX




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