Love from Above

 I dream to forget that you are not near,

Only when I begin to awake it becomes clear,

Your not here,

Im alone,

Your gone,

Far from reality,

Far from gravity,

Dreams that remind me your disapearance,

Where I am no longer in your presence,

And I wonder,

Is this a dream?,

Or a nightmare?

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is a updated version of my old poem " I dream" but if anyone wants to read my old version just ask

Reviews

[deeps]

Such an emotional write here
i can feel this, well written

[Victoria Harlequin]

Wow, this poem has a lot of emotion. I love how short it is because even though it is, it feels like so much has been said. Great write!

[Akina]

such a sweet and emotional poem.
good job.

Akina