Torn, Cut, And Bled

"Death, despair, and darkness."

I tore,

I cut and bled,

my heart and soul,

shattered,

I died,

but you fix me endlessly.

Reviews

[Noting Society]

I liked it a lot however I didn't really care for the title. I found it a bit redundant. Remember the title is part of the poem. Personally I like when the title is a key to understanding the poem but thats just me. Anyways it really is awesome. Not many people could say so much using so little. Well done. This is a great read!!!

[Robert Dees]

Thanks, I used it for some contest where you had to use only 18 words or less.