Torn, Cut, And Bled

Torn, Cut, And Bled

A Poem by Robert Dees
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"Death, despair, and darkness."

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I tore,
I cut and bled,
my heart and soul,
shattered,
I died,
but you fix me endlessly.

© 2015 Robert Dees


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I liked it a lot however I didn't really care for the title. I found it a bit redundant. Remember the title is part of the poem. Personally I like when the title is a key to understanding the poem but thats just me. Anyways it really is awesome. Not many people could say so much using so little. Well done. This is a great read!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Dees

7 Years Ago

Thanks, I used it for some contest where you had to use only 18 words or less.



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I liked it a lot however I didn't really care for the title. I found it a bit redundant. Remember the title is part of the poem. Personally I like when the title is a key to understanding the poem but thats just me. Anyways it really is awesome. Not many people could say so much using so little. Well done. This is a great read!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Dees

7 Years Ago

Thanks, I used it for some contest where you had to use only 18 words or less.

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