Eternity

Eternity

A Poem by Robert The Frank

This endless void within my heart
can be only filled by your infinite love.
If only your love was mine to embrace,
but sadly it belongs to another.
As i toss and turn at night wondering
if maybe there's a chance.
A chance to show you my love
and forever hold each other in our arms.
An eternity may pass
but even then my love for you will never diminish,
but strengthen with each passing day.
But the roaring fire within my heart that longs for your touch
 will one day be extinguished by death's bitter sweet kiss.
And on my dieing breath i'd say.....
 i love you.

© 2012 Robert The Frank


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"death's bitter sweet kiss"

Ah, the love in this poem is so stabbing and passionate. THe words you simply place together aren't just words, but a sky of endless emotion and feeling. Deep and painful as you read them. I love how you show your love and devotion in every word, can't wait to read more! Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This spoke to my soul. I have so been there. I like how the poem is personal, yet still allows the reader to put it on as well... what I mean is, it is very accessible. I think most of us can think of a time in our lives when we felt this way, and if not, we dreamed of feeling this way... I only have felt the type of love you write about in this... epic level true love... once. A few years back... a lifechanging love... but like your poem said, "Sadly it belongs to another".

Posted 9 Years Ago


A lot of people may find this all too familiar...nicely written. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem is the hope of young love and fate of days so lived, I loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very powerful and romantic. I might just have to favorite this. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful poem of love. I like the description of love and the strong statements allowing the reader to feel the loss and the wish. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"death's bitter sweet kiss"

Ah, the love in this poem is so stabbing and passionate. THe words you simply place together aren't just words, but a sky of endless emotion and feeling. Deep and painful as you read them. I love how you show your love and devotion in every word, can't wait to read more! Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A heartfelt sentiment for the one who lights the flame in your heart. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Stunning emotional poem my friend. glad you joined the site.
Go f**k yourself bestie lol

Posted 9 Years Ago



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