Kindness

Kindness

A Poem by Roderick Blakeman
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A fairy tale in poetic form

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Kindness


Once upon a time starts the tale


about a fairy and a giant brown snail


they had met long ago by a stream


when the fairy had been eating ice-cream


Snail asked for a bite


of the cold creamy white


and fairy did say it was ok


“But just the one


‘cause it’s hot in the sun


and then we can go off and play”


But snail went slurp


and ate the whole thing


leaving fairy crying and sad


“You nasty brown snail”


said fairy out loud


“You really are terribly bad”


The big snail laughed at the fairy


and said “I don’t care what you think”


“It’s you who are horrid and nasty


‘cause you haven’t shared your cold drink”


“Why would I do that”


said the fairy


“When I know you’ll sup the whole lot


if you had not eaten all of my ice-cream


I would have shared my drink like a shot”


“It’s because you are nasty and greedy


that you’ll never have any friends


and that means no one to play with


and this is where this friendship ends"


But snail sloped off uncaring


he really wasn’t troubled at all


for he thought such things as friendship


were stupid and not very cool


It was only later that his actions were felt


when he was old and all left alone


nobody ever came visiting


and snail let out a sad groan


“I wish that I had been kinder


to all those in the past that I met


for being nasty and rude to all others


I am now starting to pay off the debt”


So the moral of this story I’ll tell you


it’s to be nice and kind through your life


or the pain that you’ll suffer when older


will hurt more than the cut from a knife

© 2014 Roderick Blakeman


Author's Note

Roderick Blakeman
A little moralistic tale about being kind to others, and the consequences when you are not.

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A sweet and nice tale you have depicted. Kindness is of too much importance because at the end we receive only what we had given.
Nicely penned ..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Roderick Blakeman
Roderick Blakeman

Brighton, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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I have lived a reasonably full life taking in a bit of travel and a few different occupations. I have always loved writing but tend to do it in phases. If you like any of my poetry or short st.. more..

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