Novelty Toyed

Novelty Toyed

A Poem by Rommel Martin

It’s been a long time

Since I met anyone stable

The fixed or new will soon

end up in fables

 

Broken toys have the best stories

To think it seems routine to be defective

We have no choice and can’t be so selective

 

Our maker has no image

There’s no use looking for a label

Let it just play out

Even the wise have their doubt

 

To pieces we get over being dropped

or over used, the hands and torso

sometimes do get unglued

 

Skin isn’t plastic

The soul although is thoroughly elastic

Manufactured by two, and

Only opened by those who

you choose to.

© 2013 Rommel Martin


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This is perfect.

Creative in every single way that even the title has such a unique ring to it. Many would be reading it over and over again to get your words to stick to their minds to understand the deep meaning behind your poetry.

It's strong and incredibly powerful and marvelously enjoyable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rommel Martin

6 Years Ago

Wow... what can I say but this is probably the best review I've gotten about something I've written .. read more



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This is perfect.

Creative in every single way that even the title has such a unique ring to it. Many would be reading it over and over again to get your words to stick to their minds to understand the deep meaning behind your poetry.

It's strong and incredibly powerful and marvelously enjoyable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rommel Martin

6 Years Ago

Wow... what can I say but this is probably the best review I've gotten about something I've written .. read more
We will never encounter realness in this facade world we live in. I would rather be around the broken than the "perfect" which doesn't exist. We have no image to go by but we create our own God and He is the one we try to imitate. Otherwise, we are chasing ghosts. Wisdom is fading in this era and one can only rely on intuition and lessons learned and bless those that get it right. We are strong but not strong enough for the elements but we use our own inner resources to survive. Great poem and may you WRITE ON....................

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rommel Martin

7 Years Ago

You were so spot on with your insight and got what I wanted people to get. Thank you for being my fi.. read more
justjenn_2u

7 Years Ago

You are so welcome. I have great insight, I think..........
Rommel Martin

7 Years Ago

Yes! Yes! You do haha!

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Added on February 16, 2013
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Rommel Martin
Rommel Martin

Miami, FL



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I'm Rommel 21 and from Miami Fl, my words are slowly learning to stand still. I come from a very music inspired place, always including lyrics as an inspiration. I've slowly been coming to terms with .. more..

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