Sara's Song

Sara's Song

A Poem by Rory CJ Frankson
"

A Beautiful Stranger Sang Souls Serenity

"

Love at a fair Distance













 

Souls Surrender

 

I sat upon a moonlight ripple
that glide
refractions along
its very edge
the maiden supple recovered
the star
that dance her finger tip
sung sweetly
the light of her lyric wet
falling crescendo
into endless thrall an sail
ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song








 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Standing in the Waves

The Moon

Molds to Her Wonder
Her Form
Loveliness in True Knowing
... Her Feel of Loneliness ...

Real & Sang
Moonlight & Wave
Searching
... Spirit Themes ...

Shyly


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Author's Note

Rory CJ Frankson
Divinity assembles Beauty never seen... but Imagined.

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Magical, mystical write...It transported me from this world into one where fancy reigns supreme... Very very elegantly penned indeed! The beginning is so wonderfully mesmerizing! "I sat upon a moonlight ripple".... Wow! You weave magic through words...
"ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song"
....Astonishingly brilliant...fantastic flow...like a flowing river, like a melodious song...
Enchanting write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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You write with a sweetness and elegance that is most captivating.

Posted 13 Years Ago


quite mermaid-ish...so to speak :)...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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what a beautiful image you create ..magical..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This write is so beautiful and tender. I find it almost a lullaby to a beautiful woman adored my a man that holds her so dear. How lovely and wonderful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats the song of love for sure

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i love Sara's song (and the photograph) because of the dream like
feel that is conveyed so well. Very fine.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful and visual poem. Thanks

Posted 13 Years Ago


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this was a very magical read indeed :) I got goosebumps as the imagery played out in my mind :) :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very magical

Amazing write

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Rory CJ Frankson

Vernon, British Colombia, Canada



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It's all about the music really. I'm a Writer / Musician. Write On / Right On! Peace... Romon in Review Out Post & Creative Standard Productions. Romonx Associated Artists Rory CJ Frankson .. more..

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