Sail Asundering Wind

Sail Asundering Wind

A Poem by Rory CJ Frankson

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




 

 

Nautical Nebulous

 

Whoa, to the Main

Chart the Course

Moan the Pitch, that guide the Whale

oh weary Mariners tale.

Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross.

Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed

amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve.

Put the I an by

a courses... Measure

Moon-maidens hear me, breathing billow sails go fairing

lays tah the starboard, and I will hum for to muse.

Nary deviate the calendar day, for pleadin

for sea crests love, and fade

the Wave ah Ridin

Onoco Flow

past

Poseidon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Rory CJ Frankson


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"Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross
Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed
amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve."
Amazing words took me to the sea. I like those tales of the sea. If I could be born again. I would be with the sea always. A outstanding poem.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I would at this time like to give thanks to all the friends who have granted me such wonderful reviews for this write, and again. Grant me the inspiration to continue my trials...
On the sometime raging Sea of Creativity.
I'm truly humbled.
RCJ Frankson.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love how you can take two entities and combine them into one. Your passionate heart combined with your wittiness and masculinity, takes you to a world with no boundaries. excellent my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this! I felt like I was being tossed about on the deck of sea faring ship-could almost smell the salty breeze and feel the wind blowing my hair! That was amazing. You are brilliant. Your flow was perfect.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the mysterious, magical sea.... how i love it and poems about it.... and yours is magnificent! Oh and love the pictures you put with it too!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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this is beautiful, haunting and breathtaking..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love poems that speak of the ocean..This visual is beautiful and your words and images are stunning...great picture too...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely stunning in prose and imagery!

Tis the takes upon the dreams of watery wishings
Wherever the mains may stay and crisp the clean
Tis a journey fathomed of the mind that rises deep
To places plundered by ponderings epic sweeps.

Always a fan of your majestic ink!


Posted 9 Years Ago


A rollicking and strong nautical scene which you have written with such polish. Job well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2011
Last Updated on August 24, 2013
Tags: Gods, ships, sailing, moonmaidens, Poesidon, navigate, deviate
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Rory CJ Frankson
Rory CJ Frankson

Vernon, British Colombia, Canada



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It's all about the music really. I'm a Writer / Musician. Write On / Right On! Peace... Romon in Review Out Post & Creative Standard Productions. Romonx Associated Artists Rory CJ Frankson .. more..

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