Sail Asundering Wind

Sail Asundering Wind

A Poem by Rory CJ Frankson

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




 

 

Nautical Nebulous

 

Whoa, to the Main

Chart the Course

Moan the Pitch, that guide the Whale

oh weary Mariners tale.

Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross.

Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed

amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve.

Put the I an by

a courses... Measure

Moon-maidens hear me, breathing billow sails go fairing

lays tah the starboard, and I will hum for to muse.

Nary deviate the calendar day, for pleadin

for sea crests love, and fade

the Wave ah Ridin

Onoco Flow

past

Poseidon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Rory CJ Frankson


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"Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross
Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed
amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve."
Amazing words took me to the sea. I like those tales of the sea. If I could be born again. I would be with the sea always. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Normally I do not clap after a poem, one time for you [[[[now]]]]

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love nautical or sea inspired poems - the mystery of the blue bla bla haha - this was great - you play with the punctuation well I thought - unusual for sure, but I quite like it - makes us think about what we're reading and when to pause rather than assuming where to break ha the sneaky little rhyme is well played too! it alternates nicely - I enjoyed!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I fully appreciate the wording in this but find the punctuation bewildering .. I so want more of this to flow and feel guilty at not feel satisfied .. your creativity usually inspires me.

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"Steer the by & by; a Southern Cross
Moonlight washed the wake astern, and tossed
amongst your pleasures, your seas treasures serve."
Amazing words took me to the sea. I like those tales of the sea. If I could be born again. I would be with the sea always. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ro , anything about the oceans always strikes me .. this poem is strong and such a pleasure to read as I hear the lilt, the accent you used throughout.
Beautiful picture of Poseidon.. and the ship looks so peaceful on calm waters.

Chloe

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 18, 2011
Last Updated on August 24, 2013
Tags: Gods, ships, sailing, moonmaidens, Poesidon, navigate, deviate
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Rory CJ Frankson
Rory CJ Frankson

Vernon, British Colombia, Canada



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It's all about the music really. I'm a Writer / Musician. Write On / Right On! Peace... Romon in Review Out Post & Creative Standard Productions. Romonx Associated Artists Rory CJ Frankson .. more..

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