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A Story by Ronnie
"

Love never dies.

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I curl next to her and stroke her face like I used to. She shivers and sinks deeper into the duvet. At the same time every night she opens her eyes and looks to her right, but I'm not there. Her eyes well up, as I whisper. 

"Same time tomorrow."

© 2013 Ronnie


Author's Note

Ronnie
This was sent to a competition, rules stipulated it had to be a ghost story told in 50 words.
I can't think of a title for this.

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that's sweet. a whole story summed up in those 50 words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good...in 50 words you tell an entire story..

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 8, 2013
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Tags: haunted, ghost, first person, love, missing, lost, together, otherside.

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Ronnie
Ronnie

Lancashire , United Kingdom



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