Brothers

Brothers

A Poem by Ronny
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To my two sons whom I love more than anything in this world.

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Brothers

Two boys, with one father and one mother
Two boys, one older than the other
Two boys playing and having fun
Two boys enjoying the sun 

Two boys, so young and full of life
Two boys, that I got with my wife
Two boys, so full of eternal love
Two boys, a truly gift from above

Those two Boys are brothers
And a reflection of their father and mother
Brothers whom are so close but fight
But still best friends when it turns to night

Brothers so tiny and small
Brothers with the most beautiful Soul
Brothers with the heart of gold
Those never could be bought or sold

Two brothers defined as my sons
Whom I would protect with my fists and my guns
These boys I will forever love and cherish
These boys will own my heart until my soul will forever perish.

© 2015 Ronny


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K.
Wow, I really like this! Great work! I don't usually read poetry that much, especially poetry that rhymes. I really should because I finally realized the difficulty when I had to write a piece of rhyming poetry in classs, so I applaud you. This piece was written really well and really resonated with me, for me and my brother and my sister.

My favorite line was this one:
"Brothers whom are so close but fight
But still best friends when it turns to night"

Great write!

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Ronny

8 Years Ago

Hey Kassie.
Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm not a big poet a and don't know any te.. read more



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K.
Wow, I really like this! Great work! I don't usually read poetry that much, especially poetry that rhymes. I really should because I finally realized the difficulty when I had to write a piece of rhyming poetry in classs, so I applaud you. This piece was written really well and really resonated with me, for me and my brother and my sister.

My favorite line was this one:
"Brothers whom are so close but fight
But still best friends when it turns to night"

Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ronny

8 Years Ago

Hey Kassie.
Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm not a big poet a and don't know any te.. read more

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Added on May 14, 2015
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Tags: Brothers, Boys, family, Love

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Ronny
Ronny

Norway



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I'm not a big poet, but I like playing around with words and putting feelings and words together, hopefully you'll find the harmony between them in my work. I'm a brother and a son. I'm a boyfrien.. more..

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